Open Poetry #25 |
An eternity of roses |
MissKlarmic Member
since 2003-02-20
Posts 70Canada,N.S |
An eternity of roses On the bloom of the first rose its beauty reminds me of your thought On the scent of the second rose its smell is that of long lasting love On the silence of the third rose words shouldn`t be rethought On the touch of the fourth rose the velvet stays close to my heart On the thorns on the fifth rose the heart strings appear On the sight of the sixth rose an overwhelming smile creeps near On the slant of the seventh rose manqué seems so small On the largo opening of the eights rose reminds me of true love On the sweetness of the ninth rose as sweet as two simon-pure sweethearts On the curling of the tenth rose a gorgeous samara floats away. On the pending of the eleventh rose true love is more then visible. On an overview of there roses there's one i shall not forget The one remaining white rose there to complete the set. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely...much enjoyed. ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I just love this, sweet friend, this reminded me of the song by Bobby Darin of Yellow Roses! (big hugggssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, and may your hearts vase always be plentiful with them, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
liked this one much! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MissKlarmic~ Just L O V E L Y~ Such a beautiful bouquet of thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
All I can say is beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
Amazing. Awe-striking. (Is that even a word? It is now!) That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
WOW!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Enjoyed this one, getting my vote. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Great poem I really liked it Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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