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MissKlarmic
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0 posted 2003-03-01 10:43 PM



An eternity of roses

On the bloom of the first rose its beauty reminds me of your thought
On the scent of the second rose its smell is that of long lasting love
On the silence of the third rose words shouldn`t be rethought
On the touch of the fourth rose the velvet stays close to my heart
On the thorns on the fifth rose the heart strings appear
On the sight of the sixth rose an overwhelming smile creeps near
On the slant of the seventh rose manqué seems so small
On the largo opening of the eights rose reminds me of true love
On the sweetness of the ninth rose as sweet as two simon-pure sweethearts
On the curling of the tenth rose a gorgeous samara floats away.
On the pending of the eleventh rose true love is more then visible.
On an overview of there roses there's one i shall not forget
The one remaining white rose there to complete the set.



© Copyright 2003 Lesley Anne Crowe - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-03-01 11:02 PM


Very very lovely...much enjoyed.

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-03-02 01:49 AM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I just love this, sweet friend, this reminded me of the song by Bobby Darin of Yellow Roses! (big hugggssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, and may your hearts vase always be plentiful with them, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-03-02 02:09 AM


liked this one much!
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-03-02 11:56 AM


MissKlarmic~
Just  L O V E L Y~
Such a beautiful bouquet of thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2003-03-02 11:58 AM


All I can say is beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Amara
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6 posted 2003-03-02 12:02 PM


Amazing. Awe-striking. (Is that even a word? It is now!)

That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be.

Kellie_Cantrell
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7 posted 2003-03-02 01:09 PM


WOW!!!!
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-03-02 03:15 PM


Enjoyed...James
Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2003-03-21 02:37 PM


Enjoyed this one, getting my vote.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

carol
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10 posted 2003-04-20 01:11 PM


Great poem I really liked it

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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