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The Drive
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The Drive |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
The Drive Giant drops like paint without color Splatter on my windshield Wipers flicker like butterfly wings Desperately fighting the wind Ahead upon a hazy horizon Golden arrows streak the sky Slick black carpets of tar Line the earth There is no beginning there is no end Tires wet and slick Struggle to stay in-between the lines of the road I am a child gone astray With the last of a favorite crayon Rain drops spreading wider, falling harder My heart harmonizes With the sound of thunder I am on fire I am moving fast in the hour of speed I am running free without constraint Wheels pushing against the earth Till time marks the beginning Till time marks the end [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (04-13-2003 05:56 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SimplyGold~ A wonderful word-trip~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SimplyGold - Wind blowing, pipes sounding, motor humming, yeaaaaaaaaaa.... My vote... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."my heart harmonizes with the sound of thunder" ---this is sooo real! The whole write is! Terrific poem! Huggums, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-12-2003 10:03 PM).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I like this. "like paint without color" . . . nice phrase kraw' |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
SimplyGold~ I felt like I was sitting in the passenger seat with you behind the wheel. I really enjoyed the trip...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (04-12-2003 10:21 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Electra, this is mesmerizing, sweet friend, this is so vibrant and lively, you have my vote from the backseat, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Marge, Thank you, for taking the time for the ride. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bill, I can see you with the top down tooling along in a two seater. Sun shine all the way on the road to romantica. SG |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Thanks for the ride. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
EA, Thanks EA. You're an angel. Krawdad, Thank you. I've not read your work, I am looking for it. Noah, Get in the front seat the view is much better. Paul, Thank you I love driving with good company anytime. Spirit, Thanks for peeking in. Thank you all! SG [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (04-17-2003 03:36 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
SG, I really like this speed ride with your words. Very good writing. Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-18-2003 08:55 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
It said I didn't vote...thought I did. Well, I did now!!  Ethel |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I really like this it gets my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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