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Her Warmth
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Her Warmth |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
In the ice storm of my devotion, The sheets ache. Warm my chill with heated lips, And let not the cold touch my tongue. For your heat be my salvation And your love, the spark of It's flame. Taste the frost upon my face, Which flavors itself with My humbleness. For though I am not worthy of Your touch, loves fingers Knows no prejudice. So, touch it will, my beating Heart and dry my frozen tears. The sun exists in only you, As if pulled from her sky And pirched there, Upon your mouth. A kiss. One so that I might ease My pain and cure the unfeeling. Judge not nature, for a Thousand of her colds I would face, That I might be wrapped in your arms and cradled in your soul. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Beautiful once again Albert!!! I especially liked "loves fingers Knows no prejudice" and "Judge not nature, for a Thousand of her colds I would face, That I might be wrapped in your arms and cradled in your soul." Dare I say you are a romance genius?  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
A romance genius? I dunno about that! I pen the words that my heart speaks, but my lips are too shy to express! But thank you for saying that....You keep making me blush...hahah AL |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Albert, this is beautiful...it sounds like something my Love writes for me. I love it....  . . (I know you're knew here, but you'll soon find out that I'm one of the "hopeless romantics" on this site......HeeHee!!)  Ethel |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is romantic and beautiful. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Chillingly romantic! Rf |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Ethel. Words like these are to those whose spirit truely deserve them...If your love writes for you these kind of words, you must be truely worthy! And I can see that you are! Thank you :-) |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Loner! :-) |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Wow Chilingly? THANK YOU THANK Y OU Sir! :-) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Albert, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, and may the warmth of love always fill your soul, this has my enthusiastic vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Sir Noah!!!!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I usually don't get into mushy stuff, but I can get into your writings! |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Passing Shadows |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done..the imagery and metaphor carries nicely throughout the piece. Indeed... romantic and chilling...good stuff! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly romantic....Beautifully penned! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Cpat and Nancy....BLUSHING! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enjoyed this very much Albert!  |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you poet!!!!!!!  |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
And your love, the spark of It's flame. I like your phrasings *s ~A~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Albert - and what a kiss this is... My vote for it... BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And this is just as nice as the last one I read... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."cradled in your soul"--as close as two people could ever be... Beautiful! Love & Light, EA |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
HOW SIS THIS get back here?? I didnt even know people were commenting on it again! Anyways...Thank you all!! Glad you liked it: |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How beautifully romantic. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Albert - this IS just beautiful - Oh My - loved it - touched me deep - it did - got my vote xxoo |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is very good. You've got my vote! Deb |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
THANK YOU EVERYONE!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!  |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is so sweet I really liked it  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is a really great poem it got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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