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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-15 07:29 PM

As the rain longs for a taste
of earth and sea -

I fall towards your touch.

As the wind blows homeless
through the night -

I roam within your gaze.

There are moments when I cease to even be.

This is one.

I am the rain longing for your taste.

I am the wind blowing through your night.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

1 posted 2003-02-15 07:42 PM

Oh wow...I am deeply moved by this!!! Great and powerful read

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-15 07:53 PM

Eric, I really like the way you did
this. It's very pretty...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-02-16 12:41 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is so very touching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now this love fills your heart and the wind is the whispers of your love singing! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2003-02-16 01:24 AM

eric,

this just flowed beautifully...very
touching and lovely. your heart shines.
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-16 03:09 AM

beautiful!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2003-02-16 03:17 AM

"I am the wind blowing through your night."

so....I'm seriously diggin your poetry

and how strange that the wind has me wide eyed tonight....couldn't sleep if I wanted to...

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2003-02-16 04:54 AM

stop this...you are making me...sigh...h

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2003-02-16 05:08 AM

I am the wind blowing through your night. The last time that happened to me I got no sleep this time I am sighing with bliss.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

sellout007
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

9 posted 2003-02-16 05:12 AM

Good read, great read. Thanks for sharing!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2003-03-03 09:58 PM

That's the way. Say it simply but deeply, say it cleanly but it gently, say it strongly but lovingly.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2003-03-04 12:35 PM

Good thoughts on the rain,
and the wind blowing at night

and especially the love that lies there.

So pretty~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-03-04 03:13 AM

wow!

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