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Let it Fade
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Let it Fade |
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dashock07 New Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 4 |
In the darkness and emptiness of my world The sound of your voice whispers in the wind Oh, that sweet sound of my name Let the wind caress my cheek Let the moonlight kiss my lips the way you did Happiness has escaped me Into the neglected emptiness of spaces Oh, I wish my heart could forget those words Let the days pass without sunlight Let the seconds pass like hours, and days like decades The skies filled with stars They don’t shine, instead they weep then say goodbye Oh, let the moonlight leave without apologies Let the warmth escape my withered body Let my skin vaporize into the air, with everything else Feeling naked and cold without you As if there is no one else for me Oh, the vastness of this place, so cold Let the cold leave my lungs as I scream for you Let the darkness fill my eyes into the light…. because of you |
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dashock07 New Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 4 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes I liked the imagery. It gets my vote. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
This poem is already posted in the Reflections forum. Those who would like to respond can do so there. |
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