Mellow Yellow-to Donovan,the only man i'll ever love was born with roses in his eyes

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #25

Mellow Yellow-to Donovan,the only man i'll ever love was born with roses in his eyes

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-03-02 09:36 PM

peeking heads,
flowerbeds,
yellow fun,
smiling sun,

swing me on
the cresent moon,
magic moment,
brides of june,

constellation
revelation,
summer night surprise,

ronnie walks in rain
with you,
wake up susie
see the view,

sleepy jean,
everything green,
daydream believer,
butterflies,

catch the wind,
flying kites,
rescue me now,
my nevada knight,

roller coaster
spinning wheel,
up on the roof,
riders squeal,

line your pocket
full of shells,
blow on flowers,
wish them well,

ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh,
he loves me, he loves me, he loves me,

short skirts,
midnight sand,
hot pink toes,
trim legs, tanned

radio magic,
paul sings michele,
check the mirror girl,
damn!
youve aged well,

take me in the sand
love me now,
under the boardwalk
like a bklynboy knows how,

do a little dance,
get down tonight,
summer romance
makes life right

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-03-2003 05:48 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-02 09:40 PM

The imagery was great. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-03-02 09:48 PM

Mmmmmm, perfect combo, naughty and nice.....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-03-02 09:54 PM

Do the tighten up! yea babe!

You are so much fun Michele~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-03-02 10:01 PM

thanks, bluesy, yep, im having fun today!
in an wicked way..........

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-02-2003 10:01 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-03-03 06:05 AM

I was looking for Donovan in the one...James

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-03-03 06:25 AM

you got it james,
all u gotta do is ask, look again

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-03-03 07:13 AM

Michele,

Livey, light-hearted and fun. Like the beat and the multiple tiny trips of my own memory many of the short stanzas this brought to light. Uplifting!

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2003-03-03 11:43 PM

Very good Michele, I dont think you missed many. Michele, ma belle....So you are an oldies fan too, aint they great. We are all oldies but goodies. Remember, we are not older, just better, well most of us. There is always an inch or so to be had.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-03-04 12:37 PM

nice i missed this one..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-03-04 03:12 AM

dang! I didn't think that titles could be that long! good write here Michele...another fascinating part of you.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.