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Scrambled Intuition
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Scrambled Intuition |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Beyond the point of no return An irretrievable ball that was dropped Down on your knees agonizing death Foolishness betrayed wisdom outstretched Cymbals banging against the dropping of flesh Sentenced to the deathening noise Simply without the wisdom of thought Intuition knew of the knowledge of heart As earth shook your soul Climbing Jacob's ladder at the brink of it all While he whispered to you optimistic garble As you knew standing at the crossroad Looking for the task of this age Heartpounding at the truth of the end Even though you felt the vulnerable touch You layed the slave of this troubled way Wrong road taken is intense you can see Looking back over your shoulder As rain floods your face Terribly memorizing those past days Gone "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (02-24-2003 08:41 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bridgette, this sounds so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright as this truly is a heartwrenching piece! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Noah Thank You for being such a sweetie. I'm alright!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (02-24-2003 11:57 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so sad... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sad? Wistful? I like this piece. Ed "The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The onomatopoeia of this is spectacular! Wonderful writing, Bridgett! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
sad, but a good write Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Very, very nice! Thanks for sharing! “Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep.” -Lord Byron |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ Bridgette ... so good to see your verse here~ Intensely portrayed~ Intensely felt~ Glad you're okay sweet lady~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Intense..sad..but great write! Much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
feelings well expressed in this write, Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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SparkleeLipGloss Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19Arizona, USA |
Sad.. Very deep.. I like it.. ((Hugs)) Write on! ~~Katie |
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