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Heartfelt Words From A Stranger
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Heartfelt Words From A Stranger |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * Dedicated to Dave from Connecticut who wrote a poem for me after reading many of my poems.I was so very humbled by what he wrote so I thought I'd reciprocate by expressing my thanks in the best way I know how. * * * * I read your heartfelt words From beginning to end So many lovely words From a faraway friend Your words were very moving And tears welled in my eyes You touched my inner soul As my heart grew in size I hardly even knew you But you seemed to know me Through the words I had written There was so much you could see You put me on a pedestal So very humbled was I And as I read your words A tear escaped my eye Some people touch our lives And so soon become a part I thank you for your kindness And the words that touched my heart * * * * "My friend is like a bark rounding a tree He warms like sun on a Winter day He cools like water in the hot noon His voice is ready as a Spring bird He is my friend And I am his" I am in motion |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Sue. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful. A blooming friendship made your heart speak. Margherita |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Touching words from a beautiful soul... I thoroughly enjoyed it. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, I'm so glad you posted this here and added the beautiful graphic. You are special and deserve to have a poem written about you. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do, yay! (kiss on cheek) May Dave always be a friend in your heart just as the words of friendship I wrote for you will always remain true just as I will cherish you poem you wrote to me all my life, yay, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
enjoyed this very much. good job capturing an intense feeling. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue..this is so very beautiful.... you are fortunate to have such a friend. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, this is the most beautiful dedication of friendship. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: It's always so heartwarming to receive unexpected recognition and find you have a new friend! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
How words can just make you feel so, happy, and yet so sad, is why I love poetry! Poetry can do so much, without doing much at all.  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
"My friend is like a bark rounding a tree He warms like sun on a Winter day He cools like water in the hot noon His voice is ready as a Spring bird He is my friend And I am his" Absolutely! I just love this, Suetang. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hi Suetang! How wonderful that this person was inspired by your work - and even more wonderful that you reciprocated! It makes writing poetry especially worthwhile - that exchange of warm hands holding a moment in time. Definitely one for the book! Love your pic, too, you look so happy! Cor |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
How beautiful poetry is, to know you reach out and touch someone's inner soul. Glad he inspired you to wrote this beauty. Charisma |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
The mutual expression of esteem that each of you have achieved is what many aspire to. Nice writing. SG |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue - you know from your words here for a friend - you have touched upon the whole room - thank you xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is very pretty. A very good book submission, too.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Sue, this is so beautiful...  It's so good to take up your pen and write for a friend, how I wish I could do that... heh_,,,^.^,,,_ |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Another one of your wonderful works from the past. Naome |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
I've read through your poetry and I can truly say that your work is amazing. I look forward to reading your work everyday. Keep up the incredible work. ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how did I miss this one? |
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