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Playful Fire |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Playful Fire Who wants to be a big oak tree on the side of a hill that's ready to kill? All the green climbing up it's side then the molten rock flows; it immediately dies. The mountain got angry and spit out it's core, opened it's mouth like a hidden trapdoor Quiet black fire hidden away secretly evoked now ready to play All the villages scream, but the trees just go while everything else runs from this deadly flow. Poetry is love and love is life. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite a reflection here.... Interesting isn't it??? Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
The imagery is wonderful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Wow, this is powerfully vivid, sweet friend, this truly erupts like a volcano fueled with imagery and cadence, I love it, you have my migyty vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krystopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sad yet powerful write.. Very thought provoking. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
so true. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very good poem.. And I believe that everything has a purpose.. Trees... Well, Oxygen, wood, fire.. all that stuff.. quote: This part bugged me. 'ready to kill?' doesnt seem to make sense.. But thats just me.  Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. [This message has been edited by Connel (02-24-2003 08:12 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is very good, Krystopher...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, really thought-provoking |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I liked how this poem reads, you've done a great job.  Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Thanks everyone for your support. Connel...I wrote this poem in English at school for a personification project and I made it give an imagery of a volcano or of fire some minds...on the side of a hill ready to kill is basically a metaphor of something describing a volcano. The hill would be the volcano and the lava or "fire" would be the destructive part or the part that is ready to kill. Thanks for reading my poem and I appreciate all the votes. Poetry is love and love is life. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
good use of metaphors then  keep up the imagination |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
enjoyed  Maree. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed this post! |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Enjoyed! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
voted! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As lava flows, so did your poem... Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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