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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-03-19 02:06 PM



I took key away from lock
and broke the issue

Shaking away the missing of you
with each passing pause

Skipping the irritable torment
of every seperated motion in mind

Bypassing memory scrolling on repeat
draping itself over my aches and pains

I flinch away the hiccuping melody
that reminds me so of you.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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Brad Majors
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Georgia
1 posted 2003-03-19 02:47 PM


I felt this was less then pain but more then a tinge or unfortablness about remembering.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-03-19 03:07 PM


In time, the painful memories will simply drift away as new warm ones take their place...

Love & Light,
Earth Angel

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3 posted 2003-03-20 12:38 PM


Gemma???

Heart Hugs and Love,
Ethel Mae  

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-03-20 12:44 PM


I flinch away the hiccuping melody
that reminds me so of you.

Gemma you know I look out for your poetry, and you have never disspointed you continually raise the bar and while i hope you're feeling okay this darkness thats come out of you makes for divine writes!!

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-20-2003 12:46 AM).]

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-03-20 01:16 AM


and the kinks rule..
littlewing
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6 posted 2003-03-20 01:33 AM


Goodness gemma - know this feeling:

Bypassing memory scrolling on repeat
draping itself over my aches and pains

like a thorn in your side . . . excellent xxoo
  

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-03-20 04:44 AM


Wonder why I'm thinking of the Kinks right now...James
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