Open Poetry #25 |
What to do? |
inluvwith66 New Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 1 |
What to do? I need this to be over But still I can't let go I keep my feelings bottled up inside me So he'll never have to know I don't want to hurt him The way that he hurt me And then again I don't Know what person I should be Should I be the one that let's him use me? Or the one that makes him see. I try to hide it everyday I try not to express I Love him in anyway But deep down I know in my heart I know I just can't take us being apart So why is it that love Keeps me so confused And when it doesn’t I feel i'm being used |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is a very sincere and touching debut, all I can say to you is follow your heart, know what it wants, and you will find the answer, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you have my vote, ooohhhhh...and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. But well written. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
love doesnt make sense, most times, thats why |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
Very good piece. welcome to piptalk! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Be patient with love, for it often takes more time and dedication to blossom than we expect. Well written angst. Welcome to Passions! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I know how that feels! Welcome to Passions! good to have you! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"angst" yes, that is what I was thinking here too...welcome |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wonderful first post. Susan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inluvwith66 Good first write, enjoyed. All in good time. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Tell you what when you figure those questions out will you let us all know the answers , love is a mystery that is for sure. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Even though this is sad, it's very well written... "Love makes the world go around" |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I need this to be over But still I can't let go I keep my feelings bottled up inside me So he'll never have to know I know this feeling well. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
---one of the many riddles of love... Welcome to Passions! Glad to make your acquaintance! I am Earth Angel and I will be looking out for more of your posts! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done and much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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