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Sinzofthesic New Member
since 2003-02-21
Posts 5 |
sit back and watch It willl back around again the sent of you I can breathe again im in once around Im scarred of your skin im in depth blind folding in sun Im shattering in your voice Bleed thin with me dry bone lusts eye roots clutch to the pitch My pictures fade Im not your god Im not the strings I dont hold up stars blue in the rain my skin crys sweet lips of indecency, it dies |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) This is a haunting and powerful debut, sweet friend, I certainly hope this drama no longer is bottled inside of you, though the scars can always remain wounds will mend in time, well-done, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspire dby all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-21-2003 04:06 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
powerful debut. Definitely a contenter for the book Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Haunting and I like it.  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Welcome to Passions~ Oh my, what a poem! I especially like these lines: "Eye roots clutch to the pitch. My picture fades" Look forward to reading more of your poetry. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sinzofthesic Good first submit, enjoyed. And welcome. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
"Im shattering in your voice Bleed thin with me dry bone lusts eye roots clutch to the pitch My pictures fade" Beautifully and powerfully written! Extremely wonderful debut!! Loved it!!!  !Welcome to Passion! [This message has been edited by KoKo (02-24-2003 01:14 PM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very different and I read it twice to make sure I got into it. Welcome to Passions and good luck with your entry to the book. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nicely done, it gets my vote. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions. This is quite an intense write! You surely evoked an emotional response from this reader!--and that is what writing is all about! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hello and welcome I like the haunting quality of your poem. Please take no offense as I kindly offer: if you correct the spelling and punctuation errors I would like to vote for it. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Very powerful first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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