Open Poetry #25 |
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Alone |
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MissKlarmic Member
since 2003-02-20
Posts 70Canada,N.S ![]() |
i stand i sit i fall alone i wonder i watch i see alone i think i drift i fly alone When i sit and i watch and i think i wonder if i drift will i stand or fall? If i fly will i return or will i drift? If i wonder off to the space of nothing will i return to something? If my words were to be heard by all good hearted , would anyone hear them? In the end i can sit and watch and think, nothing comes of that. Past the end i can wonder i can watch and i can see, but nothing comes of that either. When i stand..so everyone can see me I sit and i fall because with some people life was ment to work out just fine alone. [This message has been edited by MissKlarmic (02-23-2003 05:19 PM).] |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
Hmmm...I like this. Some people's lives are meant to work out alone, though I think everyone should have somebody. This is nice, though, especially the end. ^^ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) I too believe many tend to give up and take every step on their own, though I believe everyone truly has someone and is meant to be together! (sad sigh) You state this well, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-23-2003 05:21 PM).] |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Timeless questions here, but ultimately, no one has the answer for you, except you. Well done, MissKlarmic. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Loved it! And agree with it, as there is a huge difference between being lonely and being alone. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is wonderfully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
![]() Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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