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MissKlarmic
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0 posted 2003-02-23 04:52 PM


i stand i sit i fall alone
i wonder i watch i see alone
i think i drift i fly alone
When i sit and i watch and i think
i wonder if i drift will i stand or fall?
If i fly will i return or will i drift?
If i wonder off to the space of nothing
will i return to something?
If my words were to be heard by all
good hearted , would anyone hear them?
In the end i can sit and watch and think, nothing comes of that.
Past the end i can wonder i can watch
and i can see, but nothing comes of that either.
When i stand..so everyone can see me
I sit and i fall because with some
people life was ment to work out just
fine alone.


[This message has been edited by MissKlarmic (02-23-2003 05:19 PM).]

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Amara
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1 posted 2003-02-23 05:15 PM


Hmmm...I like this. Some people's lives are meant to work out alone, though I think everyone should have somebody. This is nice, though, especially the end. ^^

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2 posted 2003-02-23 05:21 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I too believe many tend to give up and take every step on their own, though I believe everyone truly has someone and is meant to be together! (sad sigh) You state this well, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-02-23 05:28 PM


Timeless questions here, but ultimately, no one has the answer for you, except you.

Well done, MissKlarmic.

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4 posted 2003-02-25 06:40 PM


Loved it!  And agree with it, as there is a huge difference between being lonely and being alone.

          
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5 posted 2003-02-25 06:43 PM


This is wonderfully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

carol
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6 posted 2003-04-20 01:10 PM


Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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