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Open Poetry #25

From Darkness to Light

MissKlarmic
Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 70
Canada,N.S

0 posted 2003-02-23 05:10 PM

So bare.So empty and untouched
So hollow the echos can be
heard round
The walls dark and splattered
with hate and anger
the ceiling light,
pure as an angels hair
The floor a puzzle thats
left only half complete
Through the door is further
to this
Through that door is
behind where nothing
existed just pure darkness,
till the light reads the sides
Someday it will overtake
and go further behind
will lead you to the light

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-02-23 05:18 PM

(sigh) I just love how you convey value and space here in this work of art, sweet friend, there is lightness and darkness in all sectors and rooms and I believe too someday all will be just light, when we all only awaken! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-23 06:27 PM

I like the rthymn of this poem. So it gets my vote.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2003-02-25 06:46 PM

I had to read this a couple of times as I felt your meaning was more than on the surface. I took this two ways, and the one that hit me most was patience and the good turn of events that comes with it. Nicely done.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-25 07:23 PM

Very nice.. Very peaceful.. Loved it.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-25 07:24 PM

Oh, and BTW. Since I never seen your first post, WELCOME TO PASSIONS!%^#)*(&@&%

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

6 posted 2003-04-20 01:08 PM

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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