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MissKlarmic
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0 posted 2003-02-23 02:06 PM



Waiting for the debacle
A death warrant to be fufilled
Aglade in your head
with no glasswear coating
preparing for hemostasis
standing all alone
curious as so what
infections going to come
What crime will you commit
what words will come out wrong
so your penalty is death..
IS that so very wrong?
When its all been done enough is enough
typically being , you wouldnt leave a suprise
Watching for this fate this unexcusable debate
waiting for a chance to learn to concentrate
on watching you suffer taking in your pain staring at the sun set knowing of what ive gained.












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1 posted 2003-02-23 04:03 PM


Ooh, sounds as if someone is making you bleed a bit too much. Hang in there.
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2 posted 2003-02-23 04:18 PM




(big hugggssssss) Keep your chin up, sweet friend, we all send our thoughts and angel hugs your way to console the pain in your heart! (sad sigh) This is a powerful write, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2003-04-17 09:12 AM


Ouch.....
Bridgette

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carol
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4 posted 2003-04-20 01:03 PM


Very good write

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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5 posted 2003-04-23 02:00 PM


I loved this one...
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6 posted 2003-04-23 07:17 PM


a very absolute write
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