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Open Poetry #25

Thing In My Head

P.R.C
Junior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-02-23 12:50 PM

I close my eyes
And imagine everythings alright

Its the only way
I can get through the night

Trying to hold it all in
I lay here on my bed

I don't know if I can take this
I have only one thing in my head

That thing being you,
I wish you were here

I don't know what I will do
If I can never hold you near

You mean the world to me,
I hope you know I mean this

My only dream is for us to be,
To hold, to be close, to kiss

I love you
I've told you I do

Nothing I have ever said
Has been more true

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-02-23 12:52 PM

thinking too much, losing sleep...I guess we all do it

good write

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-02-23 12:54 PM

You conveyed the thing in your head very well!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-02-23 12:57 PM

P.R.C
Nice, enjoyed the read.

rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

4 posted 2003-02-23 01:06 PM

yeh gr8 poem
i really like it & can relate to it totally!
luv rosie x

small insignificant useless me

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

5 posted 2003-02-23 01:57 PM

nice

~Every girl has a dream within.

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