Open Poetry #25 |
And There It Was |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And There It Was... The right moment, in your eyes. I saw it, you couldn't deny it, the spark of yours sent to mine that traveled until it reached my heart, the touch of eyes, that made me smile. ~~*~~ That feeling, I can't escape, whenever I see you, my breath catches in a hold, my mind plays out a silent movie as I talk to myself trying to settle the butterflies within. ~~*~~ That touch, the one that turned my head, lifting my face to yours, a kiss in the want, so tempting, and knowing it was time, (my time) to feel again, the love I had been missing. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-23-2003 10:13 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautiful, M! Love the feel of this one. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good, Maureen...Hey, I've been missing you... . . Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! hope this is true to life...you certainly deserve all the love you can hold in your heart, and more |
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