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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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I don’t know if I’ve been forgotten But I feel quite alone I feel like crying Even though I know I’m not sad I’ve got so much to give But no one to give it to And you don’t know how empty it feels I’ve never felt like this before So I don’t really know what to do Every part of my life Revolves around you I can’t get you out of my mind And I don’t think I want to I’ve fallen so far in love with you It’s quite hopeless of me To be feeling this way When you know and I know It won’t make you change But I don’t know how to be without you Not for a minute not for a second And I’m so scared because I’m dependent on you I was the one sitting alone And smiling even though I was on my own But now I’ve met you I’m not just alone I’m lonely because I don’t have you Not a single part of you I don’t even know if you care I wouldn’t know what to do if you were never there Confusion seems to have reached me On another level Because lots of things that I’ve never felt before Seem to have hit me hard I’ve forgotten how to cry I’ve forgotten how to hurt I’ve forgotten how to fall In any other way but in love with you. small insignificant useless me |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sweet. Very heartfelt. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Minister Joe Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 78TX, USA |
Rosie, That's a feeling that I'm all too familiar with... sometimes--love, when it's held at a distance--makes us focus on just that want and need. It seems only if we can have a taste of what is being held from us, that everything will fall back into place. Your poem was very evocative of those feelings. Thank you very much for sharing it here, --Matt Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think. |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England |
thankyou aaa love is such a scary thing i dont want it to go away exactly but its sure as hell confusing im only a kid lol! thankz again 4 replies rosie xxx small insignificant useless me |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 Heartfelt penned! Charisma |
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