Open Poetry #25 |
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In the Night... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Tonight I see the river, ...flow across the Kansas plain, Above the drift of swirling current, ...I hear night wind's refrain, As cottonwoods stand silent watch, ...beneath glow of Altair, I reach to touch a primrose red, ...partake of beauty rare, Is gone the bustle of the day, ...no sounds of man nor beast, Midnight's calm upon the land, ...cool breeze from forth the east, Amongst the flora and the fauna, ...amongst the creatures wild, I am one with all that is, ...in night none be reviled. Come my wife, your day is done, ...night chases 'way the gloam, Sleep primrose of beauty rare, ...as to the night we roam. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I sure hope your wife appreciates your poetry as much as your friends do... Good morning, Kansas! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tim, this is a pleasure to read. Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Tim, this is beautiful, sweet friend, after a long days work a peaceful and lovely beauty sleep is so deserving! (big hugggsssss) This is a gorgeous love expression, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow! The images this paints are fabulous. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Fantastic! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ba-bump |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tim, this is beautiful.... ![]() Hugs, Ethel |
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Minister Joe Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 78TX, USA |
Environment and intimacy... very nice indeed. Thank you, --Matt Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey Tim how about submitting this for reflections...there's not much there dealing with the environment/intimacy such as this..enjoyed it all the more since it's freezing here ![]() [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-23-2003 02:27 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! so beautiful! I'm swept off my feet! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim...as always you write with such beauty and class. There does need to be one from you for the book! |
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