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Open Poetry #25

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-21 02:58 PM

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do you dance
at night
to rising moon
lay with stars
deep kneed
in spoon
caressed by
black velvetness
of dark
tender tattoo
pressed leaving
your mark
do you feel
the gentle
pull of tide
where you
let go
carried within tide
do you know
the kisses
of fulfilled night
leaving fingerprints
being held
so tight

NO
then let me
show you

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

Darksoul
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 61

1 posted 2003-02-21 03:01 PM

very pretty

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-02-21 03:05 PM

yes very pretty indeed...

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

3 posted 2003-02-21 03:20 PM

So much passion..."leaving fingerprints"

Rf

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-02-21 04:43 PM

Oh wow...this is awe - some.
Eric

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