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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2003-02-21 04:39 PM


Adoration Bared

I show
my skin
to you

opened

do you
taste the
salt

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."
© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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1 posted 2003-02-21 04:45 PM

Your poems open a shared space were we may all taste each word.
Eric
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