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Open Poetry #25

Eternity in Cleveland

Darksoul
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 61

0 posted 2003-02-21 10:33 AM

Fast crash
Down to the end
Of nowhere
Laughing all
The way
To hell
"Cum by ya"
With St Peter
Strumming
Six string
Down river Styx
Satan smiles
Hands 1st row ticket
To eternal showing
Of the best of Kenny G
Violent screams
And try to run
Legs fall off
Chained to chair
Doomed to bad jazz
Forever
While Peter, Satan
And Mr. Ed
Play Gin Rummy
For all eternity.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-02-21 10:35 AM

(chuckling) Well now... this indeed I enjoyed

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-02-21 10:38 AM

Had to read this one more than once, then laughed my butt off. I would run my legs off too!! Kenny G, indeed!! Excellent job with the irony and humor.

Susan

Darksoul
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 61

3 posted 2003-02-21 10:44 AM

thank you for your kindness

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-02-21 11:21 AM

Darksoul
Enjoyed the read.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-02-21 12:47 PM

Going up!!!

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