Open Poetry #25 |
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See thru you |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
My mind is the anvil Where I hammer you all Into bits ,Into pieces Of all that you are. My heart is the prison Where I hold who you are All the bits and the pieces That got you this far My hand brings the veangance You'd thought never come My eyes saw the secrets That were hidden so long My eyes saw the coward My mind saw his lies My hands brought the justice The heart never lies Another early piece I dug up,since I seem to be stuck for writing new stuff last few days. Jason |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...very honest and raw write |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love honesty. So therefore I like this poem. ![]() Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
time has been kind to these words, new or old they hold their power still, excellent write [This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-19-2003 01:43 PM).] |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
powerful piece! |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Like this - great write and honest. |
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