Open Poetry #25 |
The Funeral |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * A befitting day for a funeral On this cold and rainy morn Another life has ended As another has been born This man was loved by many They've all come to say goodbye You can almost hear a pin drop As a tear escapes my eye Flowers adorn his coffin Blooms of yellow, blue and white He'll be forever in my memory As his soul takes wing in flight We bow our heads in sorrow As they play Amazing Grace I hope he'll soon find peace As he enters that other place All the mourners dressed in black Now gather in the rain As I try with all my might To conceal my grief and pain This chapter of life has ended As we now turn another page We must cherish every moment While we're here upon life's stage * * * * I guess this is part fact and part fiction as some of it relates to the way I was feeling when my own father died. I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I know how much you miss your fasther but know he will always love you so much and is never truly gone, as his spirit is free and will always guide you with light and love! (wipes tears) This is compassionately said, sweet friend, I too have been to funerals and can't help but cry, God Bless You, we all love you so much! (sends angel hugs your way) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh sad...beautifully penned Sue.. ~Heart Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, though this is sad, it's so beautiful. Hugs, Ethel |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I went to one of these not long ago... and you told of it well. Too well. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue; I guess all funerals remind us of people we love, who have been taken from us. It's never a happy experience! Very well written and hope the sadness falls away! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Fatman New Member
since 2003-02-21
Posts 8 |
I thought it was sad and beautiful all at once. Nice. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad but so beautiful! |
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