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MissKlarmic
Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 70
Canada,N.S

0 posted 2003-02-20 02:08 PM

Towards the scene , off the end of life
There lies a man ,drifted in thought
He says not a word and smiles so bright
Yet you can tell deep down hes full of fright
Not scared of a person place or thing
Scared of himself and his lifes true meaning
He sang as he sat , a sorrowfull tune
Of lost importance and the blue of the moon
A soporific tune,during his last days
His faded smile being worn away
A Lionheart in his own time
slowly tame with lifes past on the mind
His formless life seemed to drift so far
As he slowly dies taking with him all those scars.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-02-20 02:20 PM

Welcome to Passions! Please,
check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-02-20 03:11 PM

nice opening write! Welcome to Passions!

you will enjoy it here...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-02-20 03:32 PM

Welcome, dear fellow poet! What a wonderful poem you have chosen to mark your debut here at Passions in Poetry! I appreciate the meaning and depth of this piece! It really appeals to me. I look forward to reading more of your poetry!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Kellie545
Junior Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 10

4 posted 2003-02-20 04:06 PM

that's absolutly beautiful

~kellie~

All Gardeners Live In Beautiful Places Because They Make Them So
- Joseph Joubert

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-02-20 06:49 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is such a powerful debut, sweet friend, it is such an aching and limping feeling to carry the whole world on your back and lift the burden when you're ever so optimistic and how that reverses your whole philosophy abruptly, this is excellent, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-02-20 06:54 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very nicely done!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-02-22 05:04 AM

Enjoyed...James

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2003-02-22 02:49 PM

Welcome to Passions... a great way to start here...

regards,
sudhir

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

9 posted 2003-02-23 08:09 AM

I am adding my welcome also.
Have a seat and stay awhile. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2003-02-23 08:44 AM

Welcomed to passions! This is a very nice poem.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2003-02-23 12:04 PM

Welcome. That's a heavy load to carry around. It's safe to drop some of it off in here, where there are many extra shoulders.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-02-23 12:42 PM

MissKlarmic
Welcome and enjoyed your write.

MissKlarmic
Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 70
Canada,N.S

13 posted 2003-02-23 02:07 PM

Thanks for the welcomes, this site seems like a good one to stick with. muchly appreciate the replys to my work.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

14 posted 2003-02-25 01:06 PM

Welcome to Passions, I enjoyed reading your poem.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

15 posted 2003-02-25 01:14 PM

"He sang as he sat, a sorrowfull tune
Of lost importance and the blue of the moon"

Beautifully lyrical! Welcome to passions!

Rf

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

16 posted 2003-02-25 06:52 PM

Welcome to Passions and thanks for posting a wonderful poem that speaks of so many that carry scars to their grave, and have an unsung song to sing.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

17 posted 2003-03-03 01:47 PM

Nice first post...and big

You're very welcome here

~Every girl has a dream within.

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