Open Poetry #25 |
Clarity |
BlackWolf New Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9 |
Listen to the forest It knows where you are It knows where you need to be Of all it sees Comfort with the wind It carries souls to final destination So many voices stained in history So many words never heard Only wispers come to loathe For many men who have died for us They still live among the trees Still breath by might of wind Ever slightly from our plane Learn a new lesson Come away to soundless music And listen for sweet notes Played at a slightly higher wavelength Just above human concievability But if you open your eye Minus the two that is seen And open the third The real sense of sight You’ll hear those sweet sounds Floating on wind Just as a passerby Listen to the wind To sounds of soul’s weep They know who you are Of all they see. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Black Wolf, ~Welcome to Passions~ I like this very much. Look forward to seeing more of your poetry. Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful .... it seems that the forest is your element. I hear the sounds and whispers. Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like your membership name... and I enjoy your poetry. Well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) This had me thinking of the Trail of Tears, dearest friend, sadly so many souls voices were never heard and we must pause and consider listening to them as we can still find peace between another and never again will we have to walk on, be exiled, or feel contained! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet BlackWolf, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very mystical write...I like it |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Well, I'm going hiking today. Excellent work. |
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