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appearances perjure
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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a hardened lump of black mixed with ashen gray at first sight, cold and confrontational, daring any spark to cause flame appearances perjure themselves buried deep rekindle awaits love’s impassioned touch |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done my friend... and a bit softer than others of late... I enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
appearances perjure themselves loved it..the whole poem...says alot to me, only I am not so sure I can be rekindled anymore. M |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
kinda romantic :-) cool.... great job! KS |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jellybeans Well done, enjoyed. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
So much meaning. Well done and thank you for reminding me. Susan |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
cpat, tis a sad commentary that one with such sharp angles is still softer than the ones before....thank you my friend M, ah, I do understand, and sometimes think the same of myself...it is our protective shell, and sometimes, it takes something momentuous to break it...thank you for your comments ks thank you  seymore, a well done from you kind sir, is a well done indeed susan thank you, glad you enjoyed [This message has been edited by jellybeans (03-03-2003 02:00 PM).] |
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