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Spare any change?
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Spare any change? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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He who begs of my love who i unconditionally give to emptied my pockets and replaced what i thought was so important with dull pennies; like thoughts add up to so much. each identifying a new curve you have given to the skin of me perfect circles cold upon touch awakening change hoisting the flag of surrender spare any change? defeatist would hand it all over trampled by twister of fate that is change pain kisses my eyes whenever i smell winds of change I'd like to keep you hidden in my pocket forever. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I really liked this. Beautiful writing. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice play on words...very creative! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of healing your way and hope you can find a real souvenir of love and joy, as change can be spent ever so easily! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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That Voice Junior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 34 |
I’ve got holes in my pockets And I can’t hold any change If I had anything value I’d hock it, My finances I just can’t explain There’s nothing of me in excess Nothing left over, none to spare, I’d really would like to confess There nothing I have to share, Except Conversation And emotion Would you like some? |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Pocket pennies may compose a nice jingle, but at a price too high sometimes. I enjoyed this one. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I like it, friend...so...*click*  Hugs,  Ethel Mae |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ericc, Dixie, Noah, That voice, Chanson, Ethel Mae  thanks for the replies, and verses you added into some of them, muchly loved! change in life can come in unwanted handfuls,cant it, some things, you want to stay the same....some people you want to keep... learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. [This message has been edited by gemjop (02-20-2003 10:00 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This one twists like early-morning sheets. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nice one... regards, sudhir |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You had so much to say with so much wisdom. I really enjoyed your choice of words to get your point across, and that sure gets my vote any day  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a keeper.....Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
gemjop - let's get this one back to the top, and my vote goes with it... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, Gemma gal, change is inevitable. Sad, but you are very strong, and are going to be able to move forward, knowing you really did try. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
a vote or two before its though |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice use of imagery here, gemjop... I enjoyed the read... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Clever yet poignant write. Very well done and I enjoyed the convoluting ride! Have a day full of sunshine! Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I know I already replied to this, but I came back to read again.  Hugs, Ethel Mae |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma - I loved this: I'd like to keep you hidden in my pocket forever yes what a nice thought - very nice write here xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A thousand pennies for your thoughts gemma~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very clever, enjoyed. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
very nice, my vote. Jason |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
pain kisses my eyes whenever i smell winds of change I'd like to keep you hidden in my pocket forever. this could stand alone and I understand it so well... ~A~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful...gets my vote! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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