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rm711
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0 posted 2003-03-17 03:04 PM



It’s raining
Really, really hard
But I’ve blocked out the noise
Got my music on full
I’m lying here
And I’m not sure what to say
I really screwed up today

The things I could have said
The things I could’ve done
Oh God I just wish I could go back
I got it all so wrong

And I’m sorry

Crying doesn’t help any more
The tears fall
But I’m numb
I can’t release the pain that way
It’s so strange
I was all right yesterday
But now all this
I just want to start again

Maybe it’s not too late
Maybe I can save today
But I just wish I could change
Say all the things I wanted to say

And I’m sorry

I know you hate me
For feeling sorry for myself
But I just can’t help the hurt
I wish it would all go away
But not today
Tomorrow it may change
How do I live this way?

Someday it’s gonna change
Someday I’ll get my way
It’ll turn around
Just give me a little time
To say

I’m sorry.

And I don't want the world to see me 'Cause I don't think that they'd understand When everything's made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

© Copyright 2003 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2003-03-17 03:08 PM


Horrible to be drowning in regret, I hope to come out the other side real soon.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-03-17 03:45 PM


We have all been there but unfortunately you can't go back so you must make the most of what you have!
littlewing
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3 posted 2003-03-17 03:53 PM


Hey Rosie - I know how you feel - and yes - to just be forgiven - one day you will forgive yourself and THAT will be enough - trust me - nice writing here xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-17-2003 03:53 PM).]

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4 posted 2003-03-17 04:00 PM


Rosie,

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-03-17 04:42 PM


"I know you hate me for feeling sorry for myself."   Reminds me of a situation where a woman hurt me deeply and then when I was feeling hurt or when I was weak she told me she dispised me.  James
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6 posted 2003-03-17 07:40 PM


Very heartfelt, and very wise. I could have used these words a few years ago.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

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