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so very deep (a Celtic song/limeric)
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so very deep (a Celtic song/limeric) |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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as I graced upon yon grand ‘ol firs and the new growths flourish fresh I hummed ‘ol tune from years gone by when insouciant zephyr brushed upon yon timbers rushy lyre sweet and the yellow leaves of aspen greet the lush melodic flow of leat all mingling in harmonic of a buoyant dribblin’ creek when all at once incessant shower pasted youthful butterfly like a flower to a seasons past old dying leaf how truly here the mountain speaks we live in a world where poems frill who unquestionably touch so very deep our dreams in slumber still [This message has been edited by lucky (04-12-2003 01:07 PM).] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
oops forgot to center... This was going to be a Celtic song and I even had an assortment of musical lines all picked out for it but with my index finger in bandage from the meat slicer I thought I’d go ahead and post the bloody thing. Hope you enjoy. dale Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~ [This message has been edited by lucky (04-12-2003 01:14 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LuckyMyFriend~ I've been waiting for you~ As always, your words touch places in my heart that are meant to be touched~ My love to Rosemary and the family~ Soooooooooooo good to see you~ Bless~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
nice to see you Marge/sis... I'd ask you where you had been but I'm sure the story is much to long, of course if you got some coffee brewin, with my finger cut and all... I could spare a minute. Love from Idaho. dale |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale...the picture you paint here is so lovely...I could actually see it! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...you stirred my Celtic blood with such a lovely piece of poetry. Warm hugs, EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for my newest library gift! OUCH, for that finger! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
lucky~ What a lovely masterpiece you've painted with brush of words. Beautifully done.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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