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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Unfulfilled Silently the symbols cast. Clouded garbles of the past Distant rumbles that are born. Sweeping down before the dawn. Manifest within your sleep. Ever present in their sweep. Setting pins within the alley Strike or spare the echoes rally. They are the phantoms that remain The spirits of a lost refrain The mist that settles into dew The crystal effervescent you Desires of a ghostly stand With paths of fear that showed quick sand Choices made without adroit. Unfulfilled without exploit. They are the rumbles flashing gleams. They are the lightning in old dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now you know I've read enough to know perhaps were this thought came from so... I shall meet for a game of pins... then walk you down toward the Inn... a pint of pale for me and you? A drop or two of Randy's brew... ~*~ then'll we'll go find your rifle and your dog!  Hugs and good morning, Sy!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine That sounds awful good to me.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy! Hey! I made it on time..even with the changing of the clock.  Freshly brewed Chai tea is ready. ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy and Chai tea, what could be better. Have a good sunday. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, well, your poetry certainly does not leave one "Unfulfilled." Awesome write. Now..let's see...Plumb jam on toast to-day to go along with tea this morning? hugs to you dear poet, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, You know the way to my heart, LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
They are the phantoms that remain The spirits of a lost refrain The mist that settles into dew The crystal effervescent you Desires of a ghostly stand With paths of fear that showed quick sand Choices made without adroit. Unfulfilled without exploit. They are the rumbles flashing gleams. They are the lightning in old dreams. ===================================== The mist that settles into dew The crystal effervescent you ~~~~ Choices made without adroit. Unfulfilled without exploit. ~~~~ And those will be my way cool lines of the day. What this ... "Unfulfilled," you say? Tis a matter of the cup seen half empty or half full, But thy rhyme scheme dream fills us with wisdom's cool rule. *pouring tea till your cup overfloweth with raspberry bree* and *winkies* to go with your Tink-twinkies. *L*  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I love this poem. We have similar writing styles. This poem spoke to me because at this stage in my life, I am attempting to fulfill the unfulfilled so that I may become the person I should have become. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, you are too cool for cool, WWRS Patricia Sounds right to me, thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Every now and aGRIN ... I flip the back pages ... and boy, oh boy ... am I glad I did~ To tell you what I like best ... I'd have to copy the entire piece~ I love the all of it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, lookey what I would have missed if Marge hadn't flipped the back pages!!! Your words, dear Seymour, are always like a breath of fresh air. No matter what you decide to write about, your rhymes are always superb. You know, that's my favorite kind of poetry. My favorite form to write is rictameter. Now, if I could just figure out how to put the two together, I'd be fine.....  Heart hugs,  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) I think we always have unfinished business no matter what, it is our commitment to all keep embracing beauty and wisdom and get to know your world so much more clear and the possibilities! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge How can you thank an angel, perhaps a second set of wings. LOL Ethel, You walk lightly on all the paths you take I have no worries about you. Noah, I agree, I don't think our buisness is ever done. Thank you |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent! Enjoyed very much Maree |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maree, Thank you so much for the read and enjoy. |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
wow! "the crystal efervescent you" i loved this line. i havent seen such a beautiful poem! i could learn a thing or two from you! keep up the magnificent work! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LUV_R_GIRL2379 You flatter me, LOL thank you. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...As always enjoyed very much. Quality at it's best. You just keep humming along like a fine oiled machine...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy~ Very beautiful and very cool...I love this. Wonderfully done, sir. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, Nice reply, thank you. vlraynes Thank you dear, good morning/ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"Strike or spare the echoes rally" I like that line. I've read this poem multiple times and each time come up with greater depth and meaning. Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you so much. |
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