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Open Poetry #25

Love Long After

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-12 04:20 AM

While i collect my feelings
you simply say you miss me
i melt on the floor
when we talk
its like we never parted

oh i know everything thats bad
and i know everything good
i have a hold of it
i curl up with it at night
i hate dreaming of you

feels like it was just yesterday
we would be lying,
cant lie
i love you still
cant hang on too long
they might figure it out

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-04-12 04:52 AM

Talia:

i curl up with it at night
i hate dreaming of you

yes - bittersweet - xxoo

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2003-04-12 09:51 AM

beautiful..........

~~ Connie ~~

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-04-12 10:02 AM

I feel the same way about someone who has come and gone in my life. You said it beautifully and succintly. Thank you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-04-12 10:05 AM

Talia, this one hurts.....wanting to
hold on to the memories, but also
wanting to let go of the love. It is
a good thing, though, to have the good
memories to hold onto and dream about.

Hugs,
Ethel

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