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a shared revival |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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we both found each other's living tombs and tore the self-woven shrouds from our faces caught the newborn breaths with our own and reached into the other's breast (found) we hold the other's heart on raised-arm thrones and when we face each other our arms... our ecstatic faces... they make the unbroken path of infinity |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a very interesting write... muchly enjoyed... particularly this "we hold the other's heart on raised-arm thrones" regards, sudhir |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
beautiful words, Kindly, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you...recognize the sacred in all things. "raised-arm thrones" You stun me. The beauty of the visuals, the truth that I KNOW you know,and sweet poet, you write with an easy confidence these days. Like pulling silk threads into tapestry...oh, I want a book of YOU.  (toldya I was greedy) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
This mean you're back posting regularly..i hope so |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
this poem wasd truly amazing and beautiful! your use of words lets the reader imagine exactly what your talking about! very impressive!! by the way are you from iowa? |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
we both found each other's living tombs and tore the self-woven shrouds from our faces Another master of the visual. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brian - you just hit it all to homebase - sitting here speechless truly - I FEEL this . . . quite amazing xxoo |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I smile at you guys I'm just trying to explain myself thank you...for reading and listening |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I saw this as a circlar thing....I still do. I see most things that way, but, I'll come around (snicker). |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Brian, your words whisper like a prayer between during a most sacred moment. Lovely writing.  Sunkissed. |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
brian~~ hi! do u mind if i ask if u are from newton,iowa..there was a guy i used to talk to one yahoo chat alot..that i havent chatted with forever..just curious ..i used to be sweetie21 on yahoo if that helps. any how plz let me know... thanks a bunch! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
interesting imagery enjoyable unique unshrouded honesty? |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
luvr girl...... no I am not from there and dont know you but thanks for reading! thank you sunkissed and Kacy? yes..... the gray blanket is gone and there is nothing but the color of honesty the color of skin remaining and it is good thank you |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
brian~ thank you for your time! it was MY PLEASURE to read your work thanks again LUV_R_GIRL2379 |
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