Open Poetry #25 |
My Life |
Little_One Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 34montana |
My family life is destroyed By love that seems like it was never really there Hurt comes from the life I live The people who give me grief I live day by day knowing your love Seems real yet I know it isnt You cant love me if you treat me this way Scream at me Yell at me Emotional, Physical, and Verbal Abuse All wrapped in one short life Short for I want not to be inseprable from you Life with you I dont want to live For no love from me is there And yet I wish to love you with all that I have There is no love shining in these eyes There are only a small tears tinkle Hurt and rage, to much for you to ever know You will never have to feel this pain |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
painful write! It sounds like your life is not all it has the potential to be. *HuGS Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
sounds like alot of pain..very sad...that the other side of this love doesnt feel the pain..good write keep up the good work! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Little One~ Very sad. It shouldn't be that way. I hope things get better...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Seth Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 74Arizona |
Hi. I'm Seth, pleasure to meet you. It sounds like you've had a rough evening. I am sorry for that, too often we humans treat the ones we love the worst, out of familiarity or we just think the other person knows we love them by default. Either way, we should treat the word love as does the english language... a VERB. Take care of yourself and never quit expression. Seth |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
'my life.' what an apt title. l hope things have gotten better since you posted this, litle one. *hugs,* and smiles... you'll find what you're look for - anyone with talent like this deserves a new chance at life. please, don't give up. laurie. |
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