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Little_One
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since 2003-03-16
Posts 34
montana

0 posted 2003-04-12 01:35 AM



My family life is destroyed
By love that seems like it was never really there
Hurt comes from the life I live
The people who give me grief
I live day by day knowing your love
Seems real yet I know it isnt
You cant love me if you treat me this way
Scream at me
Yell at me
Emotional, Physical, and Verbal Abuse
All wrapped in one short life
Short for I want not to be inseprable from you
Life with you I dont want to live
For no love from me is there
And yet I wish to love you with all that I have
There is no love shining in these eyes
There are only a small tears tinkle
Hurt and rage, to much for you to ever know
You will never have to feel this pain


© Copyright 2003 Kristin - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-04-12 02:37 AM


painful write!  It sounds like your life is not all it has the potential to be. *HuGS
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



LUV_R_GIRL2379
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since 2003-04-09
Posts 42

2 posted 2003-04-12 03:16 AM


sounds like alot of pain..very sad...that the other side of this love doesnt feel the pain..good write keep up the good work!
Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2003-04-13 03:03 AM


Little One~ Very sad. It shouldn't be that way. I hope things get better...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Seth
Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 74
Arizona
4 posted 2003-04-13 03:23 AM


Hi. I'm Seth, pleasure to meet you.
It sounds like you've had a rough evening.
I am sorry for that, too often we humans treat the
ones we love the worst, out of familiarity or
we just think the other person knows we love them by default.
Either way, we should treat the word love as does the english language...
a VERB. Take care of yourself and never quit expression.

Seth

laurie
Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153
canada, ontario
5 posted 2003-06-01 10:51 PM


'my life.' what an apt title. l hope things have gotten better since you posted this, litle one. *hugs,* and smiles... you'll find what you're look for - anyone with talent like this deserves a new chance at life. please, don't give up.
laurie.

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