Open Poetry #25 |
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thank you for letting me be myself...again |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
i'm so glad, i could entertain you, make you smile, i see it across the miles, coming through loud and clear, like your laugh, when you hear mine that cackles, and speaks an old familiar dialect, like a long island chick, i know i could amuse you,bemuse you, confuse you, and excuse you, you're my sounding board, for this soulbearing one, my listener, of this theatre of the mind, that i've created, of the zany adventures of a hot, horny housewife, always something new to unload, on poor old you, but you take it all in stride,a trooper, my favorite audience, these days, more than happy to oblige, to be my straight man, mr. conservative, in his comfortable chair, sneaking a peak in, to the absurd, i can see the twinkle in your eye, the rise you get from this all, like when you pulled my pigtails, or i let you peek under my dress, way back, way back, when........... we do play off eachother, well, don't we? even then, it must have been written, that somehow we'd connect again, life's funny isn't it? thanks again, really, i need this, it's cheaper than paying a shrink, and to think, when we say, goodbye, until next time, how nice your own ball and chain must feel, afterall, yeah, i'm a pip, and a trip, disneyworld, the fourth of july, christmas, a walk on the moon, but, be glad you don't share my permanent bed, you might then hear...... a different tune [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-28-2003 03:33 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
when we say, goodbye, until next time, how nice your own ball and chain must feel~ You're a good trip!!! Love the edges in your work Michele~ *amazing* |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like the way you let your feelings flow. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I like your style. It is like you are taking the reader along for the ride through slices of your life. ~ May your journeys be joyous! Warm hugs, EA |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
What can I say....thanks...for really nice write. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well, gee, Michele, you don't vary in your outrageous aplomp and slight shock value added for the sheer joy of it, huh? Whether this is really you, or not, many are, and you captured that personality well. I found the ball and chain phrase notable, too. Happy happy, joy joy...Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Where have you gone Mrs Robinson.....jolting Joe has left and gone away. Where is the InkedOne....banned but not forget, always in our hearts.... |
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