Open Poetry #25 |
She...............for Ethel |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She She was at first timid, in time, living life, she matured comfortably within, accepting of what she could, could not do always managing one more mile her smile glowing lightly for that was who she was |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is beautiful, great format with depths and beauty within! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A hug for both of you! This was delightful. I am sure that she will love what you have written---and the fact that you would honor her in this manner! Love, Light & Friendship, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Karilea..this is SO beautiful!! And so very much like Ethel! She is going to be blown away with with! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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sister3of4 Junior Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 16Northumberland, England |
'She' sounds like a nice lady, a nice (horrible word) piece. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such a lovely tribute to sweet Ethel. Love to both of you. Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Karilea, now you really have made me speechless........well, almost..LOL This is so sweet, and done in my favorite rictameter, too!! You know that I'm going to keep this forever. I'm going to put it in my library and print it off, too. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, SWEET SUNSHINE LADY And for you, a rose Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Such a diamond you have penned! Like the lady in every way. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Well done Enjoyed the read Gloom |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOP-SI-DAISY Goofy me forgot to keep it. *click* now I did. |
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Aya Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 42New Zealand |
It was a great poem,and a great read |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
in reference to her journey with poetry, this sums her up perfectly... what a terrific tribute! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Sunshine Lady, I have not be with you and your great poets for long. But I have read of dear Ethel, her poems are song. For you see, I experienced what she has gone through. And I know she will appreciate your ode to her, too. My words here are simple, yes, but you too have inspired me. Thank you. -Patricia |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This was so sweet. And very fitting for our dear poetess Ethel. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kari - what a tribute what a woman - both of you is just lovely xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Perfect -- just perfect! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! a great piece! and we have all grown to love our Ethel, yes! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a nice thing for you to do, and so "her". |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Lovely, from one beloved poet to another thanks for sharing |
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