Open Poetry #25 |
Freckle Face |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~*~ Seldom in my childhood, Was I referred by name, Kids just called me "Freckle Face" And I'd hang my head in shame. I hated all my freckles, So Mom would often say, "Sweetheart, they're your beauty spots, And you look so cute this way". But still I felt so ugly, With brown spots on my face, Since sunshine made them come out more, I'd seek a shady place. Then one day, a light went on, Inside my freckled head, If I had lots and lots of spots, I'd have a tan instead! So, I head out in the sunshine, On a long, hot summer's day, But all I got, was a painful burn, And more spots on display! Mom, said not to fret them so, For they would fade with time, And now that that, has come to pass, I miss those spots of mine! When looking back in retrospect, I really was quite pretty, Too bad I didn't know that then, And that is such a pity. Now I have a daughter, In pigtails and pink bows, And she certainly is beautiful With those spots upon her nose! She says she hates her freckled face, So, as my Mom would say, "Sweetheart, they're your beauty spots, And you look so cute this way!" ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-11-2003 05:18 PM).] |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
I'm sure you both are quite beautiful! I hope your daughter grows up with your talent as well. Writers gift from mother to daughter just like the gift of spots! Thanks for sharing, Angel of the Earth! "Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep." -Lord Byron |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kristopher ~ That was an exceptionally sweet reply. Thank you so very much for your thoughtfulness! Love & Light, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How adorable! Thanks for the smiles today! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ Right back atchya! Huggums, Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, this is so sweet. I bet you and your daughter were and are just as beautiful as can be. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Linda, I think kids with freckles are soooooo adorable and I used to have many of them too and still do have some! (kiss on cheek) I guess I got all of them by dreaming with the daffodils in the sunshine too much! (giggles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm still short for my height but my mom thinks it's cute especially when I'm cheering and running, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, I always had freckles and wanted a dark tan so bad. I have gotten burned so bad from the sun that I had to go to the doctor...that was after I had left home. Anyway, when I became a teenager all the guys never noticed the freckles when I was in my bathing suit on the beach. LOL So, I decide my Irish part of me was just fine. HeeHee!! My Dad was the one who had them and told me they would go away. I loved this Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel A delight to read. This is a keeper. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
EA...I agree with Sy...and delight! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This is so cute and adorable! I have freckles, too...But I've always liked mine lol I really enjoyed reading this! Brought a big smile to my face I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My Dad says that folks used to say he'd swallowed a dollar bill and it broke out in pennies... so I came by freckles naturally... and they never would hold hands and form a tan! LOL This is delightful, EA. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SmartChick ~ Oh, thank you so much, Sweet Sue! Both of my daughters are as beautiful on the inside as they are on the outside! Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ ..."dreaming with the daffodils in the sunshine"...sounds heavenly Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ As for you and I ever having a tan, it seems highly unlikely! That Irish blood in us refuses to cooperate. Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Why thank you, kind sir! I am honored! It pleases me that this poem will have a home with you! Love & Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Martie ~ Well, bless your little booties! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Koko ~ I'm pleased my poem brought a smile to your freckled face! Love & Lots of Sunlight! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern ~ ---That was a great line! I will remember that one! Thanx to you!--and your Dad! Huggums sweetheart! EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
So sweet Linda !! Awww..hugs for this write. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris ~ It truly tickles my fancy that this poem that I had written for one of my daughters, has been so well received! Thank you for your kind reply! Huggums to you! Linda |
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