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Open Poetry #25

Those Awful Raining Days

Dance
Junior Member

since 2003-03-28

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-04-09 08:01 PM

Days like today,
makes some wither and gray.
But for me,
days like today are joyful and gay.

I sing with the melody I hear.
I rumble with the thunder
that is so near.

I smile at the lightning,
I dance when it's raining,
I let nature's music flow within.

But the main question is,
what will happen to me,
When it all ends?

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-04-09 08:11 PM

Hmmm...maybe you can dance in the bathroom shower? lol. Just kidding. I really enjoyed this write. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-04-10 09:44 PM

Dance - I too love the rain - sometimes like a rebirth but that feeling you get? Yes - is hard to rid and:

But the main question is,
what will happen to me,
When it all ends?

amazing write here xxoo

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2003-04-11 12:25 PM

Man I LOVED this!!! I also love rain!
This starts out giving me a sort of frolicky (sp?) feel...And then those last lines gives you a hint of curiousity...Anyways! I loved this!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

lost_star
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 114
NY, U.S.A

4 posted 2003-04-11 03:03 AM

I still love dancing in the rain. Great poem!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-04-11 10:59 AM

I love the rain and when Mother Nature doesn't cooperate, I pretend I'm in a cleansing and revitalizing rain storm while I am in the shower with the water blasting out on high. If I want a soothing, gentle rain, I decrease the pressure!

Love & Lightening,
EA

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-04-11 04:57 PM

I was born on a rainy day. God help us all if the rain should ever stop for good.
thanks for this post, I enjoyed the refreshing thoughts it brought.

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