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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-04-11 12:44 PM


If you must push,  don't be angry
If you will shove, and show no fear
Now that I, am in a corner
You have been warned, I've made it clear

To think me weak, shows misjudgement
You seek to win? Seek smaller prey
In the end, if you must test me
It's in the end, I'll let you pray

© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-04-11 12:49 PM


Awesome!!!
carol
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2 posted 2003-04-11 12:53 PM


Jason, I love it  so true

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

SPIRIT
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3 posted 2003-04-11 01:05 AM


Another well done write - enjoyed.
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-04-11 01:09 AM


Jason:

To think me weak, shows misjudgement

so very true - something we all forget from time to time - nice write again xxoo

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-04-11 02:58 AM


good write! very powerful!
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6 posted 2003-04-11 03:52 AM


Yes, Jason, it is a
powerful write.
Hugs,
Ethel

regards2you
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7 posted 2003-04-11 10:32 AM




Yes, Jason, this is wonderful.

Having been pushed and shoved once or twice or a hundred times, perhaps,
on a personal level, this reminds me to remember just where it is I get my strength.

Enjoyed this,

Thank you, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-04-11 10:39 AM


..."to think me weak shows misjudgement"

--A fantastic and memorable line in one fantastic little poem that says a great deal!

Love & Light,
EA

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-04-11 10:56 AM


I dislike being tested...although life seems to do that at every turn.

*s
M

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
10 posted 2003-04-11 01:19 PM


Now that I, am in a corner
You have been warned, I've made it clear

like a rat in a corner
been there
keep up the fight
nice job

Gina Culliney
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11 posted 2003-04-12 12:51 PM


Jason, remember the alpha wolf is the most dangerous when cornered.  Well done, masterful and powerful with a razor prowless edge to it.
LUV_R_GIRL2379
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12 posted 2003-04-12 01:50 AM


well done! very powerful! reminds me that noone really knows there own strength until pushed..keep up the good writing!
KoKo
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13 posted 2003-04-12 09:52 AM


LOVED the last stanza in this! Great write!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

vandana
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14 posted 2003-04-12 07:13 PM


enjoyed
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
15 posted 2003-04-13 03:51 PM


Don't touch me, my mother touched me once...ONCE.

Million points for anyone who can guess what movie that lines from

btw Jason great write I'm the same way, I'm generally calm but keep pressing and watch out

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