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Don't shove me
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Don't shove me |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
If you must push, don't be angry If you will shove, and show no fear Now that I, am in a corner You have been warned, I've made it clear To think me weak, shows misjudgement You seek to win? Seek smaller prey In the end, if you must test me It's in the end, I'll let you pray |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Awesome!!! |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Jason, I love it so true Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Another well done write - enjoyed. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason: To think me weak, shows misjudgement so very true - something we all forget from time to time - nice write again xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write! very powerful! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Jason, it is a powerful write. Hugs, Ethel |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, Jason, this is wonderful. Having been pushed and shoved once or twice or a hundred times, perhaps, on a personal level, this reminds me to remember just where it is I get my strength. Enjoyed this, Thank you, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."to think me weak shows misjudgement" --A fantastic and memorable line in one fantastic little poem that says a great deal! Love & Light, EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I dislike being tested...although life seems to do that at every turn. *s M |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Now that I, am in a corner You have been warned, I've made it clear like a rat in a corner been there keep up the fight nice job |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Jason, remember the alpha wolf is the most dangerous when cornered. Well done, masterful and powerful with a razor prowless edge to it. |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
well done! very powerful! reminds me that noone really knows there own strength until pushed..keep up the good writing! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
LOVED the last stanza in this! Great write! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Don't touch me, my mother touched me once...ONCE. Million points for anyone who can guess what movie that lines from btw Jason great write I'm the same way, I'm generally calm but keep pressing and watch out |
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