Open Poetry #25 |
Remembering You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I have many fond memories Of Summers here with you Cool clear water so inviting A brilliant shade of China blue I clench the sand between my toes As I gaze on out to sea But a part of me is missing For you're no longer here with me I put my feelings down on paper As I reveal my love for you You are here with me in spirit A great part of all I do As I gently close my eyes I imagine you are here When my memory is in focus Thoughts of you become so clear * * * * "Love is the lifeline I cling to when grief threatens to pull me down into eternal darkness" I am in motion |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue - what beautiful memories you have and am glad you shared them - and what solace you get from them - this is quite beautiful But a part of me is missing For you're no longer here with me Always in spirit . . . xxoo *wink* I did see the quote and I am keeping it - hehehehehe |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I have many fond memories Of Summers here with you Cool clear water so inviting A brilliant shade of China blue Loved this so so much! Beautiful! Loved the pic, also I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
And is it just me or does anyone else see that cloud as being a bird...or is that sort of the point of the pic...? I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Beautiful picture and equally beautiful words. I also see the cloud as a bird. |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Great poem, and i really like the picture with it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching Sue...a beautifully sad write [This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-11-2003 02:54 AM).] |
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