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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2003-04-10 11:44 AM

Bedroom Door

Seize my gaze
and as
eyes of yours
meet eyes of mine

fade into me

roam the hallways
of my spirit
and find the door
to the
bedroom of my soul

touch me
and awaken
the passion
long ago laid to rest

stir desires hidden
in dark corners
so that new flames may rise
and cast a warming glow
upon your heart¡¦.

Annie Lehberg
4/10/03

for KAC

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (04-10-2003 03:43 PM).]

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

1 posted 2003-04-10 11:53 AM

really sensual and romantic poem!
loved this write.
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2003-04-10 11:55 AM

Wow, this is a great write, I really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing. I hope this gets in the book

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-04-10 03:16 PM

A real surreal feel to this...

Love & Light,
Earth Angel

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-04-10 03:56 PM

Oooh, love this. I do hope it gets into the book!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2003-04-10 05:05 PM

Great to read you again Annie. Going to stick around awhile, I hope.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-04-10 10:24 PM

I'm definitely one of PIP's
"Hopeless Romantics", so you
know I love this. I hope that
it gets in the book.

Hugs,
Ethel

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-04-10 10:31 PM

Enjoyed the soft glow through the hallways leading to the door.

Such a warm and romantic feel to your words~

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

8 posted 2003-04-11 05:47 PM

EVERYONE,

Thank you so much for the great applause, I am thrilled this was enjoyed so well.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

9 posted 2003-04-11 05:49 PM

Duncan,

Oh my goodness, how I ahve missed your words......I do hope all is well with you. Although your last entry was incredibly sad, beautiful as well.
I can not spend nearly as much time here as I would like to, but know I do pop in in every couple of weeks and look for a few favorites....you are always top on my list.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

10 posted 2003-04-12 10:46 PM

A very nice love poem it gets my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

11 posted 2003-04-13 12:30 PM

Yes, passionate and warm. I like the sense of rythme that comes with the read.

Very nice..
SG

[This message has been edited by SimplyGold (04-13-2003 12:31 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-04-13 12:33 PM

Annie - this is lovely
passion and longing
and this:

fade into me . . .

I love this!

xxoo

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

13 posted 2003-04-13 08:58 PM

Way too lovely not to vote for. Great!!!!!!!

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