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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-04-09 11:39 PM

World withers
into cliché
this is not his
sun decayed and
run to ground
dead rises
from its ash
bleach skin cold
in porcelain rebirth
apathy is blood

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-04-10 12:42 PM

Desolation is a strange thing to be a master of, but when you bring this much life to it, it'll do fine.

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-04-10 02:22 AM

. . . like a stranger in a strange land . . .

but with all birth - of any kind - there is pain and growth - rid the blood of apathy and the dying sun and create a new becoming . . . one that suits you and not the world in which you live . . . let them live that world - it is time to live your own . . . for once

This one got me good - as I can relate too well - as always amazing me still . . . xxoo

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

3 posted 2003-04-10 03:44 AM

And Sue quotes Iron Maiden,( and Heinlein) am I getting old to know this? another awesome write.
Jason

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (04-10-2003 02:13 PM).]

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

4 posted 2003-04-10 02:32 PM

I despise cliche's

my world has been reborn of what I once thought was dead - not dead *just rejected by others

& I enjoy my own world - with a depth rarely conceived - in a world so shallow

to conceive what I believe would be a beauty beyond their eyes

Krystopher Morris
Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry

5 posted 2003-04-10 02:38 PM

Interesting...Thanks for sharing!

“Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep.” -Lord Byron

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-04-10 03:03 PM

awesome piece!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-04-10 10:26 PM

Rat in other words I'm a miserable b@stard and I write it well. Thanks ..grin

Sue,For once..yeah we all know this, easier said then done but you know this too

Thanks Jason appreciate it, run to the hills

Dream I'm happy for you and I know it couldn't have been easy, some days i fight the fight and others..well there's this

Thanks Krys

Thanks you Brad

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