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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-04-10 12:27 PM



Ripples

Like ripples on the water
My tender passions expand
Reaching your safe shore.

believe in what your heart feels...

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-04-10 12:31 PM


Very well done! I dug the soft sensual tones of this piece.
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2 posted 2003-04-10 12:33 PM


Great writing, thanks for sharing
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3 posted 2003-04-10 12:37 PM




(sigh) Oh Scorpio, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile to imagine a sweetheart also casting stones on the other side of the lake like love letters being sent, yay! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-04-10 12:40 PM


Words to sigh for...

Love & Light,
EA

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5 posted 2003-04-10 01:20 PM


Yesss..as EA said, words to sigh for!
Very nicely done Scorpio...
I read a deeper meaning herein.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-04-10 01:47 PM


Last May, I did a little dedication to one of our poets - your poem reminded me of it - and I excerpt a part from it, for you...

Do you think
God put a wink
In water’s ripple
Just to invite us in?




Lovely, Scorpio - thank you!

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7 posted 2003-04-10 01:50 PM


Nicely done!
I love ripples.

May ripples of LOVE
become waves of PEACE

Krystopher Morris
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8 posted 2003-04-10 03:16 PM


Ripples of imagery! Thanks for sharing!

"Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep." -Lord Byron

scorpio
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9 posted 2003-04-10 10:36 PM


Thank you Brad...there definately is soft quality to ripples on calm waters..

I appreciated your kind comments Marshalzu..

I like the image you created in your reply Noah..

Glad you liked this Linda..

I could watch ripples by the hour...

Yes my Enchantress, you may have discovered the hidden meaning...*S*

Thank you Karilea...i'd like to see the rest of your poem..

Yes there is something fascinating about ripples Midnightsun..

Thank you Krystopher for your read..

believe in what your heart feels...

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