Open Poetry #25 |
Ripples |
scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Ripples Like ripples on the water My tender passions expand Reaching your safe shore. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very well done! I dug the soft sensual tones of this piece. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing, thanks for sharing |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Scorpio, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile to imagine a sweetheart also casting stones on the other side of the lake like love letters being sent, yay! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Words to sigh for... Love & Light, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yesss..as EA said, words to sigh for! Very nicely done Scorpio... I read a deeper meaning herein. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Last May, I did a little dedication to one of our poets - your poem reminded me of it - and I excerpt a part from it, for you... God put a wink In water’s ripple Just to invite us in? Lovely, Scorpio - thank you! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely done! I love ripples. May ripples of LOVE |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Ripples of imagery! Thanks for sharing! "Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep." -Lord Byron |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Brad...there definately is soft quality to ripples on calm waters.. I appreciated your kind comments Marshalzu.. I like the image you created in your reply Noah.. Glad you liked this Linda.. I could watch ripples by the hour... Yes my Enchantress, you may have discovered the hidden meaning...*S* Thank you Karilea...i'd like to see the rest of your poem.. Yes there is something fascinating about ripples Midnightsun.. Thank you Krystopher for your read.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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