Open Poetry #25 |
Fairy tale |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Fairy tale (Name of the bad guy is Pronouced Ugly-Bean) There was once a land of bliss nothing seemed amiss until one day an ogre came that way and paved away all happiness The Ogre's name was Ugleebean He caught the Queen and treated her very obscene Ugleebeen was a terrible sight to see and very mean All smiles faded soon and all felt the horrible gloom as the Ogre gloated all day He treated his new subjects to true tyranny and even beat up the Princess little old nanny Tears began to pour and soon the land had its very own ocean shore for all the salted sadness surround the once town of gladness Who would save the Queen and her subjects? Who indeed would come to their rescue? What will they ever do? Then one summer’s eve something happened something new A Sailor arrived a Roguish Kind of guy Who had seen many places and really ugly faces stepped on shore He saw the land of sorrow and recalled a land of Bliss in this place long ago He asked the nearest man that man screamed and then fled truly such dread The Sailor of Roguish nature soon started to explore this sin could not be ignored It was not long before the Ogre became aware of this new edition to his stolen land Ugleebean let out a roar calling out our would be Hero naming the sailor a son of a *#@^+ This did not fare well with our man of the sea He promised he would bring this Ogre to his knees The fight had started quickly Pain screamed from both foes as they threw numerous elbows and fist Teeth grinded and some bones split Our hero broke the Ogres hip causing a great fall and a sinking feeling as Ugleebean lay in the dirt he had lost The Bully had been beaten and sent on his way the land of sorrow started to fade and was replaced with its former Bliss and grandeur Now the Queen watched this great battle and new where her heart wanted to be with that Roguish sailor who fought so bravely Luck be told the sailor caught sight of the Queen and knew all would become right and in the end a Happily ever after would began on that night [This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (04-08-2003 04:08 PM).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I liked this alot! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Rogue I really enjoyed this write. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thank you I wanted to try something new Thomas AKA: Rogue |
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