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Open Poetry #25

Today , Tomorrow, ect.

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

0 posted 2003-04-08 07:19 AM

I remember how you lounged
lazily across my thoughts
smiling invitingly, stolen
glitter from some star in
the deep of your eyes

Something about your voice
curved around my figurative
enticing me out of my shell
& into hell...

Didn't we burn?

Even when singed
I couldn't help but binge
& devour the sweet taste
of your luscious lips when
eloquence trickled from
your tongue's tip & onto
my page

Boy, was I reading you!

But like most feel good things
it came to an end, you got
tangled around your bend
while I stood indecisively at
my fork- trying to use
a spoon
it just wasn't working

still, I'm acutely aware
of that invisible thing that
keeps me singing your songs
& wondering if you still hum
to mine...

Remember?

Sunkissed.
4/03

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2003-04-08 08:53 AM

still, I'm acutely aware
of that invisible thing that
keeps me singing your songs
& wondering if you still hum
to mine...

Can relate...enjoyed.

Maree

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-04-08 10:09 AM

This is beautiful!! I am putting it straight into my library. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-04-08 11:21 AM

I like this a lot.

And this...made me grin at your creative insight and honesty....

"You got tangled around your bend
While I stood indecisively at
my fork - trying to use a spoon

It just wasn't working"

Enjoyed this greatly,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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