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The Most Beautiful Girl In The World
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The Most Beautiful Girl In The World |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Most Beautiful Girl In The World One time I was with the most beautiful woman in the world. I don't know what she ever saw in me. I couldn't hold up my part of the bargain. I failed miserably, miserably. Have you ever had a poem it took years to write? Maybe I can sleep in peace tonight. JamesLee April07 2003 "Hey, did you happen to see the most beautiful girl in the world, and if you did was she cryin', cryin." B.J.Thomas |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love the rhythm in this melancholic write ... and beauty indeed does not protect from pain and fragility. ... if the poem is not finished, there is still hope! Love; Margherita |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah James... I have had poems that have taken decades to write... enjoyed this for the honesty..and the presentation. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello James That song was playing in my head the minute I read the title. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Margherita, Cpat and Sue for the nice responses... I wish that I never had to write this...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - bittersweet let it pass through you and return again one day like that poem waiting to be penned . . . xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautifully expressed, James.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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