Open Poetry #25 |
Traveling The Words |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Traveling The Words if you write of me and of you write us a happy ever after and leave out the words like rules just write of how you will hold my hand as we jump over the cracks and every road that is traveled leads to us |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
writing happy endings is not always so easy... I have tried myself and seem always to get hung up on something.. hope yours do end up happy... nicely done... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
K A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nicely done! |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
1s_l, I'm fascinated by this . . . Such an interesting perspective, "traveling the words". And it is true, the words do describe the journey, and even prescribe it, or for that matter, proscribe it, as you suggest. Your wisdom is showing. S A G |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
if you write of me and I of you does that make us friends? If we leave out the words, like rules, and jump over the cracks, will we be friends. . . evermore? If i fall down along the way and skin my knee, seemingly forget the words I wrote, will you still write of me? Will you wipe the tears away, forget the words, like rules, so when I write of thee, you'll still write of me? Or must I write of you, and you of me, secretly, because the words of the rule, took priority? Yep...never could just tell you I like what you write, could I...sorry I took so much liberty with your wonderful piece, but I had fun anyway... jimmy [This message has been edited by jwesley (04-09-2003 08:37 PM).] |
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