Open Poetry #25 |
Chances |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There are a thousand different deaths at the end of every breath - Which one is ours? This is my eulogy: I am one who has loved you deeply. I draw a new breath. And take my chances. |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
This sounds so deep of nostalgy, yet so filled with a big love, like a calling from the depth of the spirit. I listen to this breath, it whispers love. Greetings Eric, intense words, Etain. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Oh Eric, I feel no matter what we are risking through each breath but surely there is no more beautiful risk than to breathe in standing up for love! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Death as transformation, with each new breath new chances can be taken ... there is a mysterious depth to your eulogy ... the past tense holds some sadness but the affirmation stands on its own eternally ... You sail through secretive waters ... and as usually you sail beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Well done, enjoyed. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Always a pleasure to read your poetic thoughts. Sunkissed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Treasures. You write gems, and make treasures. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
what a way to die.....h |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, you have so many beautifully romantic thoughts. Thank you for sharing them with us. I love them all. "Love makes the world go around" |
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