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Starsfalling
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since 2003-03-18
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some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-04-07 08:04 PM


i dont deserve,
this oh so "wonderful" life..
theres nothing to look back on,
nothing to look forward to
if only i wasnt so weak
i would have ended it so long ago
im dead from all my loneliness,
it drained me long before..
then there was you,
you seemed so perfect...
the final solution to everything,
thats when you burnt me, and threw my ashes to the wind
a husk,
thats all i am
fine then, here comes my final solution

-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

[This message has been edited by Starsfalling (04-07-2003 08:43 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2003-04-07 09:02 PM


Yes you do!

I hope all is well with you dear friend.

Starsfalling
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since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows
2 posted 2003-04-07 09:10 PM


i feel like (insert S word here) damn them and there no swearing policy... im full of anger and thats only fueling my depression
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
3 posted 2003-04-07 09:16 PM


Well you can always go over to SN and just cuss like a sailor
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