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Could You reply To Me
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Could You reply To Me |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Could You Reply To Me I will take all the blame I knew what I was doing I suppose I was wrong By continued pursuing I will never understand I am left to wonder why Your silence I question You choose not to reply I had wanted to belong I cared for you so much I could find no reasons You fail to keep in touch Warm loving thoughts You often wrote to me All seemed to be true You replied constantly Writing "love you lots" Was how it used to be Am I in your thoughts Could you reply to me Have I been forgotten Are questions too late You have the answers Should I patiently wait Hope©2003 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS Time will go regardless, nice write. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a well written work, this... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ I would 'reply to' you ... for you always write so tenderly~ So nice, as always, to see you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's strange how things change..and it's sad too |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...my thoughts many times...james |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* I have been there and feel your pain...I hope you get the reply you want...**hugs** take care Hope |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hope - ahhhh . . . . we all know this one much to much more than we would like to - loved this write - sorry you had to write it - BUT glad you did . . . xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HopeS - I feel a sadness here, and I wish you the very best. Tomorrow comes, and with it change with better days ahead... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
sad write, but filled with such longing it makes the read worthwhile. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Reminds me of a thread that's hanging! Such a nice poem Hope, I wonder how many of us have felt this way, unraveling. |
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